Chapter 6: The Tutorial That Shouldn’t Exist
by inkadminThe subway mouth breathed cold air.
Callum stood at the top of the stairwell with Mara Venn at his shoulder and watched darkness pulse below the cracked concrete steps. Not flicker. Not shift. Pulse—as if the tunnel had lungs and the city’s ruined underground was drawing breath through broken teeth.
Above them, the blood-red moon hung between leaning skyscrapers, painting the glassless windows like wet wounds. Somewhere to the north, monsters howled from the skeletal remains of Times Square. Somewhere closer, a human screamed once and then stopped.
The Shattered Ladder did not sleep. It only changed hunting patterns.
Mara adjusted the straps on her dented forearm shield. The thing was ridiculous: half riot shield, half stained-glass cathedral window, its blue-white sigils crawling slowly along the rim like frost. Her other hand rested on the haft of a compact mace tucked through her belt, but Callum had already learned she reached for the shield first.
“You’re sure this is where your broken map points?” she asked.
Callum blinked, and the interface carved itself brighter across his vision.
[GLITCHBOUND CARTOGRAPHY // UNSTABLE ROUTE]
Destination: ???
Recommended Level: ▓
Party Size: 1-4
Entry Condition: Die Here / Don’t Die Here / Remember The Tutorial
Reward: Error:Reward_Not_Found
Warning: This dungeon has been removed from the active Ladder.
Static crawled over the text. For one frame—less than a blink—the words changed.
YOU WERE NOT SUPPOSED TO FIND THE BEGINNING.
Then the map marker returned, a sickly green arrow pointing down into the subway station Callum had died in.
“Pretty sure,” he said.
Mara looked at him.
Callum kept his face neutral.
“That was not the voice of a man who is pretty sure,” she said.
“That was the voice of a man who understands confidence is a resource.”
“And you’re conserving it?”
“Aggressively.”
Her mouth twitched despite herself. The night had carved shadows beneath her eyes. Dried blood marked the edge of her jaw where one of the raiders’ hooked knives had grazed her before Callum’s corrupted skill detonated half the platform lighting. She had healed his ribs afterward without complaint, then almost collapsed when she thought he wasn’t watching.
He had watched.
He had always been good at watching—cooldown timers, enemy rotations, player tells. It was the living people part that had gotten harder after his career burned down.
Now everyone on Earth was a player, the world was a dungeon, and the scoreboard had teeth.
Callum took the first step down.
The moment his shoe touched the stair, the air sharpened. The ruined street above dimmed behind them, not with distance but with a curtain of unseen pressure. Sound flattened. The monster calls, the crackle of fires, the distant collapsing groan of a building settling into its new dungeon geometry—all of it dampened until only their breathing remained.
Mara followed. Her shield brightened a shade.
“Instance boundary?” she whispered.
Callum glanced back. The stairwell entrance behind them still showed the street, moonlight, and a toppled yellow taxi half-sunk into vines of black metal. But the view had become too perfect, like a painted backdrop.
He lifted a hand and pushed toward it.
His fingers hit invisible resistance. A ripple spread through the air, red and gold.
[DUNGEON ENTRY CONFIRMED]
Zone: Fulton Street Station – Tutorial Remnant
Status: Deleted
Synchronization: 3%
Objective: Survive the tutorial.
Objective: Escape the tutorial.
Objective: Kill the tutor.
Objective: ▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓
Mara’s eyes narrowed as she read her own version. “Mine says ‘Low-Level Training Instance.’”
“That sounds friendlier.”
“Then it says ‘This content is no longer supported.’”
“Less friendly.”
They descended.
The station had changed since Callum’s death.
He remembered thunder. Concrete screaming. Rails bending like hot wax. A stranger in a red coat trapped beneath a collapsed beam. His own hands bleeding as he tried to lift something too heavy for human muscle. The train coming loose. The ceiling opening. The moment when gravity turned into a fist.
He had woken beneath the blood moon with the taste of dust in his mouth and the System burned into his skull.
Now the stairs ended in a station concourse preserved at the exact second after disaster. Tiles floated in the air, suspended mid-fall. A fountain of sparks hung frozen from a severed electrical conduit. Dust motes formed a storm that never settled. Posters peeled from the walls advertising movies that no longer existed, their smiling actors overwritten by crawling red script.
CHOOSE.
FIGHT.
CLIMB.
Callum stepped around a frozen chunk of concrete and felt it hum against his skin.
“This is wrong,” Mara said softly.
“The whole world got turned into a murder RPG three days ago.”
“No. I mean mechanically wrong.” She nodded toward the air. “Safe hubs have rules. Monster zones have rules. Even the raider camp had consistent aggro behavior. This place feels…”
“Unpatched.”
She stared at him.
“Old esports term,” he said. “Before the balance pass. Before the bugs are cleaned. Before the devs admit the exploit exists.”
A scream tore through the concourse.
Mara snapped her shield up. Callum pivoted, broken knife in hand, the short blade catching red light from the error messages overhead.
On the far side of the ticket barriers, three people ran from the platform stairs.
A heavyset man in a business suit clutched a baseball bat with both hands. A teenage girl in a school hoodie dragged a limping woman behind her. Their faces were gray with terror. Blood soaked the man’s sleeve. The girl kept looking backward, mouth open in a soundless sob.
“Help them!” Mara surged forward.
Callum caught her wrist.
“Wait.”
She rounded on him, fury immediate. “They’re civilians.”
“Look at the floor.”
Her gaze dropped.
No dust moved beneath their feet. No cracks formed around their shoes. The suspended motes remained undisturbed as the three fleeing figures passed through them like light through smoke.
The man reached the ticket barrier, tried to climb, slipped, and looked directly at Callum.
His eyes were empty white.
Then something came down the stairs behind him.
It was shaped like a subway worker if a subway worker had been drowned, buried, and reassembled by something that had only read a description of bones. Its orange safety vest hung over a torso of blackened tendons. Its head lolled at a broken angle beneath a cracked hard hat. One arm ended in a rusted signal hook that dragged along the tile with a shriek.
[Training Revenant – Level 1]
Role: Basic Hostile
Tutorial Tip: Attack to reduce enemy HP!
The revenant swung.
The hook punched through the suited man’s back and burst from his chest. He folded around it, mouth wide, bat clattering from fingers that had already begun turning translucent.
The girl screamed. The limping woman shoved her away. The revenant tore free, stepped, swung again.
Mara flinched as the hook passed through the woman’s neck in a spray of ghost blood.
“They’re dead,” Callum said, forcing the words through a throat gone tight. “A recording.”
The girl fell backward over the barrier. The revenant climbed after her. She scrambled, sobbing, hand outstretched toward where Mara stood.
“Please,” the girl whispered.
Mara’s shield hand trembled.
The hook came down.
The girl burst into static.
For one breath, the concourse was still.
Then the three civilians appeared again at the far side of the ticket barriers, running from the platform stairs.
The same scream tore through the station.
Mara’s face had gone bloodless.
“Combat loop,” Callum said.
He hated how calm his voice sounded. He had used that voice at eighteen in championship finals while crowds roared and his whole team tilted around him. He had used it at twenty-two when sponsors dropped him one by one. He used it now because if he let anything else in, the ghost girl’s outstretched hand would crawl under his ribs and stay there.
Mara ripped her wrist free. “Loop or not, I’m not watching that again.”
She moved before he could stop her.
Her shield slammed into the ticket barrier with a burst of blue-white light. The metal gate crumpled inward. The revenant paused mid-swing as if hearing her for the first time. Its blank white eyes snapped toward the living.
[WARNING]
You have interfered with archived tutorial data.
Ghost Aggro Enabled.
“Mara!”
“Good,” she snarled. “Aggro me.”
The revenant lunged.
She met it shield-first. The hook crashed against her guard and scattered sparks that hung frozen for half a second before burning out. Her boots slid back an inch. A glowing number flickered above her shoulder.
-7 HP
Callum moved.
His broken knife was junk by any sane loot table, a cracked starter blade with a durability warning that pulsed like an infected tooth. But when he fed intent through his Glitchbound class, the edge blurred.
[Skill: Error Step]
Status: Corrupted
Target Location: Behind Enemy
Actual Location: Negotiable
The world skipped.
For an instant, Callum saw the station from six angles. Behind the revenant. Above it. Inside the wall. Beneath the rails. One view showed him dead on the floor with the hook through his eye. He chose the only angle that didn’t end in immediate regret.
He appeared half a pace to the revenant’s left, momentum wrong but usable. His knife drove into the tendon bundle beneath its shoulder.
Critical Hit?
Damage: 14 / 2 / 999 / NULL
The revenant convulsed. For a heartbeat its texture peeled away, revealing a wireframe skeleton beneath, red lines labeled with unreadable code. Then it backhanded him.
Callum hit a pillar hard enough to make his teeth click.
HP dropped. Ribs complained. The interface tried to display a damage number, failed, and spat black squares across his vision.
Mara drove her mace into the revenant’s knee. “Stay down, you broken transit corpse!”
“Workshop that line,” Callum wheezed.
“Not the time.”
“It’s always the time.”
The revenant shrieked, a metallic announcement chime twisted into hunger. Callum caught the rhythm of it—the windup, the shoulder drop, the overcommit after each hook swing. Basic enemy design. Punish panic. Teach blocking, dodging, counterattacking.
A tutorial monster.
Except its third swing feinted.
“Left!” Callum shouted.
Mara shifted on instinct. The hook scraped across her shield instead of her throat. Her eyes flashed toward him, surprised.
Callum was already moving. “It’s learning from the loop!”
“Tutorial enemies don’t learn.”
“Deleted ones do, apparently.”
The revenant raised its hook again.
The ghost civilians reset behind it, running, screaming, dying in overlapping fragments now that the loop had been disturbed. The suited man appeared and vanished with the hook already through him. The girl flickered in three places at once, reaching, falling, reaching.
Callum’s interface stuttered.
[Hidden Condition Detected]
Archived Failure Count: 18,442
Would you like to review deaths?
Y / Y
“No,” he muttered.
The System selected yes.
Memories that weren’t his slammed into him.
A woman swinging a purse at the revenant and losing her arm.
A child hiding under the ticket machine until the hook found him.
A cop firing bullets that passed through corrupted hitboxes.
Players—newly awakened, terrified, level one—trying fists, pipes, prayer, bargaining. All of them failing. All of them resetting. All of them feeding the tutorial data.
Callum staggered.
Mara saw. She planted herself between him and the revenant, shield flaring. “Callum!”
He forced breath into his lungs. The deaths kept pouring through him, but he had spent years making chaos into patterns. Inputs. Timings. Exploits. The revenant’s loop had adapted because the archived players kept attacking the same way. Its AI had overfit to fear.
So don’t play like them.
“Stop blocking,” he said.
Mara grunted as another strike hammered her shield. “Terrible plan.”
“It expects blocks. Drop the shield on the next overhead.”
“That is the definition of how heads come off.”
“Trust me.”
The revenant rose to full height, hook lifting above its hard hat. Its torso twisted for a skull-splitting downward chop.
Mara’s jaw clenched.
Then she dropped her shield.
The hook came down.
Callum activated Error Step and did not choose a position.




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