33. Junior, You Dare Question My Gender?!
by inkadminShe sits in my quarters, sipping tea like a normal girl, not a monster who just reached Qi Condensation peak in under two months. Her hands are steady around the cup. Her breathing is calm. Her eyes hold none of the gold that flickered during her breakthrough I watch her, and I realize: in all but her official cultivation rank, she’s already surpassed me. Fully.
None of her Qi Condensation peers can hold a candle to her. The top disciples from Greenstone’s tournament, the ones who earned inner sect status, the B-grade talents with their special physiques… they’d be children playing games against her. Foundation Establishment cultivators would struggle against her the way I did in our sparring sessions. Possibly even worse, considering they wouldn’t know her habits like I do. Mei Lin at 5th Stage? Wei Chen at 3rd? They wouldn’t last ten seconds.
And I can’t wait to see what happens when her qi transforms from gaseous to stable liquid. The jump from Qi Condensation to Foundation Establishment ranges from fivefold to tenfold, depending on the individual. If she’s already like this at Qi Condensation peak, already able to hold her own against me, already seeing weaknesses in Foundation Establishment opponents—then what will she be when she crosses that threshold? A match for Foundation Establishment peak? Able to force Core Formation experts to take her seriously? From there, we’d have a ‘true’ defense against sect threats. A walking nuclear deterrent in the form of a twelve-year old girl.
She sets down her tea cup.
“Master. I can feel it.” Her voice is quiet, contemplative. “The door to Foundation Establishment. It’s… waiting. If I push, I could break through tonight.”
I lean forward. “Will it be stable if you do?”
“Yes. The bone makes sure of it. My foundation is solid. The Five Phases method has balanced everything. There’s no instability.” She pauses, fingers tracing the rim of her cup. “But… I don’t think I should. Not yet.”
I wait.
“There’s more I can learn at Qi Condensation. Techniques I haven’t mastered. Elemental combinations I haven’t tried. The forms I’m creating for the Coiling Dragon style… they’re not finished. And I want to understand each element completely before my qi changes. If I rush to Foundation, I might miss something. Gaps I’ll never fill.”
I stare at her. A twelve-year-old. Choosing patience over power. Choosing perfection over advancement. When every instinct in a cultivator’s body screams to push forward, to break through, to become more, she’s choosing to wait.
“That’s wise.” I hear my own voice, surprised. “Wiser than most cultivators twice your age.”
She shrugs, modest. “The bone shows me the path. Rushing would leave gaps. I want to be complete before I move forward. It won’t be long; maybe a week to ensure everything’s perfect.”
She pauses for a moment, taking a brief sip of tea before asking another question. “Master? Why don’t more cultivators do this? Wait until they’re perfect before advancing? If it makes such a difference, why does everyone rush?”
I open my mouth to answer. Then I pause.
‘Why don’t people do that?‘
In every cultivation novel I’ve read, every system I’ve studied, the advice is always the same: build a solid foundation. Perfect each stage. Don’t rush. But looking at my memories of both lives, I realize exactly why.
‘Survival takes precedence over optimization.’
Slow and steady is the privilege of the blessed. The wealthy. Those who don’t need to fight for their next meal, their next spirit stone, their next year of life. The disciples of major sects can afford to take years perfecting each stage because they have walls and elders and arrays protecting them. Minor sect disciples don’t have that luxury. They face rival sects who’d steal their resources. Bandits who’d kill them for a handful of stones. Missions that send them into danger. Internal competition for limited resources, for the chance to be noticed, to advance, to matter. You can’t take years to perfect your foundation when you might not survive the month.
Even more so, taking one’s time means years. For most cultivators, the gap between Qi Condensation stages is measured in years, not weeks. Spending years perfecting each stage would mean reaching Foundation Establishment in their forties; if they reach it at all. Mid-tier sects usually discourage such perfectionism. It’s simply low ROI. They’d rather their disciples (unless they’re heavenly talents) hit Foundation Establishment and become useful. Fighters. Mission-takers. Income-generators. Long-term development is a luxury they can’t afford except for the most talented of disciples.
And beyond that… It’s not common knowledge. Most cultivators only have flawed manuals, incomplete traditions, techniques passed down through generations of mediocrity. They don’t know what perfection looks like. They don’t know what they’re missing. It’s a luxury. A luxury of knowledge, of resources, of security. A luxury most cultivators will never have. And Ling’er should take advantage of it. Ruthlessly.
I explain this to her, watching her face shift from curiosity to understanding to something like sadness.
“That’s… unfair,” she says quietly. “That most people don’t get to choose.”
“It is unfair. The world is unfair.” I pour myself more tea. “But you get to choose. You have the bone. You have the method. You have time. Use it.”
She nods sagely, that odd wisdom settling over her features. “Master, you are truly wise.”
I snort. “I’m mediocre. I just read a lot and think too much.”
“Those are the same thing, sometimes.”
“Enough. When you’re ready, tell me. I’ll make sure everything is in order.”
She nods, finishes her tea, and rises. At the door, she pauses.
“Master? Thank you. For letting me choose.”
I wave her off. “Go to bed. You have techniques to master tomorrow.”
She smiles and slips out into the darkness.
I sit alone in my quarters, staring at her empty cup, and think about choices. About privileges. About a twelve-year-old girl who has more wisdom about cultivation than most elders will ever have.
“Heup!”
I get up with a grunt, and I stand on the roof, as I do so often now, watching the stars. Forty years I struggled. Forty years I scraped and hoped and barely survived.
In two months, everything changed. I don’t know what comes next. I don’t know how long we have before the world notices. I don’t know if I’m strong enough to protect her when they do.
But tonight, none of that matters.
The next day is a blur, as usual. Without any elders to delegate tasks to, most of the sect administration falls on me. Supply orders. Disciples’ progress reports. Mine production logs. Herb garden updates. Hiring extra hands to renovate key buildings within the sect. It’s endless, detailed, exhausting. And I enjoy it to an extent. It’s rewarding work, watching something grow from nothing. In the afternoon, I descend to the Nascent Soul’s tomb. With a firm understanding of formations now, I install additional concealment arrays around the entrance. Preparation for Ling’er’s breakthrough, whenever that may be. The existing formation is strong, but it’s nine centuries old. I add layers, reinforce weak points, extend the detection radius.
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I swear I can hear curses from the afterlife.
You dare use my tomb to show off your prodigious disciple? And use my sect’s techniques to store pork?! I should kill you!
I pause, heart racing, hand on my sword. Then I activate the Gaze where the voice seemed to come from.
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Elder Frostheart – Status: Deceased Verdict: Still dead. You’re hallucinating from sleep deprivation. Go to bed earlier. |
I relax.
‘Right. Sleep deprivation. That’s all.’
I finish the arrays and return to the surface. The afternoon sun hangs low, painting the mountain in shades of amber and gold. Below, I can hear the sounds of the sect: disciples training, servants working, the steady rhythm of a community finding its feet. I descend toward the training yard. The disciples are gathered in a loose circle near the main hall, their practice apparently abandoned. They’re talking in low voices, conspiratorial, glancing around like children sharing secrets.
I pause behind a corner, curious.
“—has to be something, right? The food, the supplies, the underground freezer that freezes things solid? This didn’t all come from a new mine vein.” That’s Jun, his voice sharp with suspicion.
I still.
Wei Chen shrugs. “Maybe the Sect Leader’s been saving for years? Old Chen said—”
“Old Chen doesn’t know anything.” Jun cuts him off. “None of us do. Two months ago we were eating gruel and freezing in our robes. Now we have spirit rice and winter cloaks and meat seven times a week. Something changed. Someone changed.”
The others murmur. Mei Lin shifts uncomfortably.
“Jun, maybe we shouldn’t be—”
“I’m not accusing anyone of anything.” He holds up his hands. “I’m just saying. The Sect Leader is different. The food is different. And that freezer—” He shudders theatrically. “Have you been down there? The walls are solid ice. The air hurts to breathe. Since when can he do that?”
Wei Chen scratches his head. “Maybe he always could? He is Foundation Establishment. You know how large the gap is.”
“Foundation Establishment doesn’t mean you can freeze things solid with a wave. That’s—” Jun lowers his voice. “That’s a constitution thing. A special affinity. Ice-aspected. Yin-based.”




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